Newton,+Lucillia

Round 1 (Aff/1A) Judge Mariah Donnelly:

- You not need to give me a roadmap for the 1AC- i.e. don’t tell me how many advantages you are reading and that you are reading a plan text - You should read your evidence off of something like a chair or something that comes level with your face - You should cut down on the inherency evidence that you are reading - Be specific about your impacts- don’t just say we have ”Stuff” what is stuff - Don’t engage Thor in the cleanliness debate ask him how it is relevant - Don’t write out your entire 1AR- you wont have enough time - You also need to give me a road map for the 1AR - I think your argument about how their evidence kind of contradicts is good but it needs to be made earlier and you should run condo to make it a voting issue - Don’t say “white” people school- money issue about school funding has nothing to do with transportation- it has to deal with taxes - Don’t clean up before the 2AR has even gone - YOU NEED TO FLOW THE ENTIRE ROUND